evaluation

this is my finished magazine cover which went alost as expected. it is like my flat plan but the side part saying this month's events is on the opposite side but i didnt take into acount the shoulders of of the picture. if i did it on the right hand side the font would have been too small to read. also my flat plan shows a collage logo but i then realised we could only use pictures we had taken so i had to get rid of that idea.the text box i was using wouldnt blent with the background one thin i could have done to eliminate this would have been to take the picture more profesionally and used enough light to make the etire background the same shade of colour. the cartoon strip at the bottom should be a real cartoon on a relevent topic around the collage unfortunately i didnt have enough time to spend on drawing comic style illustrations.